I think it's man vs society
Answer:
My brother was writting the letter when my sister came in.
Explanation:
You might want to keep this little helpful tip in mind:
Passive voice: the object is being modified/done/etc. by the subject.
→ We can see how the letter is being written by the subject.
Active voice: the subject is the one doing/modifing/etc. the object.
→ We can see how the subject is writting the letter.
Hope it helped,
BiologiaMagister
Answer:
Yes but there's a mistake.
Mistake: Some where in the middle
It says "Oh hey, my im Osric, we better get started".
You have to fix Oh hey, my im Osric to, "Oh hey, I'm Osric".
But, other things are that this is very creative, it mentions words like, "Vividly, rare, miniature, rigid, desolate and lingered. These are very creative words.
And yes, thanks for that awesome lil' story!
