Answer:
I don't have the writing to help. T-T
Explanation:
I need a passage to go off of to help.
Answer:
I think lion is to den but I may be wrong
Explanation:
Sorry if it didn't work
You can revise your claim to make it sound more original or specific by changing the hook to a very different but still effective one, you should have different types of redirect to stand out
He found his next door neighbor was funny and friendly.