The correct answer among the choices provided is option C. Sentence 2 is missing a necessary comma to make it grammatically correct. The should be a comma after the word 'Hilo'. All the other sentences don't need to have a comma because of the word 'but'.
1. Wait a minute, please. The concert is going to start soon.
3. OK. At 5 o’clock we will take you outside the shopping center.
4. They probably didn’t give me the job. I had a terrible interview.
5. I’m sorry about losing that book. I will buy you another one next week.
6. Can you call me when you get the news?
7. If it doesn’t rain tomorrow, we don’t have to bring our umbrellas.
I do not know the story but this is the "formula" for writing an analysis:
Topic Sentence: Use the title, author, and genre of the book and describe what you are going to analyze.
Sentence #2: Quote the text (ex. For example, the author tells of how the dog "ran from his owner" and attempted to "fiercly chase the cat" as the "ran through" the street (Paragraph 6).)
Sentence #3: Analyze what you just wrote and say why it ralated to your topic.
Sentence #4: Same as #2
Sentence #5: Same as #3
Sentence #6: Conclusion sentence that says the topic again in a different way.
A. A pronoun can be used as the preposition of a verb.
Tip: you can say In my head was a whole tornado of ideas and worries. And no it is not personification.