Me gusta servir helado
I hope this helps
There are 8 errors. The errors are teine, y, animaels, vivimos, mama, soy, peude, and somos
1. Me 2. Les 3. Le 4. Les 5. Yo 6. Les 7. Me 8. Les 9. Le 10. Quien 11. Le 12. Le 13. No 14. Te
So for the usted form, you use the 3rd person singular of the present subjunctive instead of the 2nd person singular present indivatice so, 'hable'