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Answer:The Polar Ice Cap itself reflects sunlight energy (heat) back into space, rather than the heat being absorbed by the Earth. This is called albedo, the amount of sunlight reflected by an object. As the Ice Cap melts, the albedo is reduced and the Earth absorbs the energy that is not reflected.
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If you want the honest feedback, I got you. I was really good, but I have a few suggestions to make it sound more "official":
- Italicize sounds (i.e. change "Thud!" to <em>Thud. </em>in the second paragraph)
- Make sure formatting is reasonable and consistent: "1 month later" is too big, the title should be bigger and "Beanbag" is incorrect (it's bean bag)
- Suspense would work very well in this story. I wouldn't reveal who the speaker is until the last paragraph or even last sentence. To do this, you can touch more on the emotional aspects of this story in the introduction and body paragraphs (no naming names, places, things, etc.) Make it abstract as you can to build up to the answers: Who is talking? What happened to them? Why do they feel this way? Things like that.
- Stop being so repetitive with words like "demon" (maybe substitute for "little devil" or "menace")
- I see the humorous aspect of this story, but I would make sure to not include too many spelling and grammar mistakes.
Sorry if my suggestions are a little too intense, but I can tell you are a good writer and can easily improve in these areas! Please let me know if this helps!
Based on your willingness to know when to ask for help when needed, id say you’re discerning. you might also consider yourself humble or reasonable.
perhaps you wonder about how you are perceived by others? it’s not a bad thing if you are, just an idea. or maybe you wonder about other peoples ideas.
maybe you hear the voices of those who object injustice, as shown in the media though certain social justice movements.
maybe you see buildings burning or people marching (social movements - i don’t think you need to add your opinion unless you want to)
maybe you want change, or success, or to improve yourself.
don’t be embarrassed to talk about pretending to be a character during a childish game. utilize that reality into an art form. for example, if you want to be a doctor or a nurse, maybe say “i pretend to listen to my future patients hearts.”
maybe say you feel that change is coming.
instead of saying that you’re touching a physical object, try saying something along the lines of “i touch the hearts of those who need encouragement.” if you choose to use a physical object in your work, that’s okay too!
maybe you worry about what the world has come to, or how many lives will be negatively impacted medically, psychologically, or economically as a result of the pandemic.
maybe you cry about people who die, or people who live with dementia, or maybe you cry when someone you love is sad.
