1. Include hooks and details to keep the reader wanting more and more of your content.
2. Use sensory details in your statement.
Example of sensory details in statement: I place a bite of the baked mac and cheese in my mouth and a bomb of flavor bursted in my mouth. Gooey, melty, warm cheese with pepper on top felt like heaven as it hit my tongue.
Reading about the mac and cheese might make you want some of it right then and there on the spot. That's how you know you made the reader want more and put good sensory details.
A; it mentions in the second sentence that he hadn't slept two consecutive hours due to dreams. He kept trying to get back to sleep near the end of the story, so that would be the main conflict.
