That is correct! Don’t forget, the electrons are negatively charged. :)
True Because if you think about it you will understand
Not being on my phone
Clean my ears
Listen to key words
Make a riddle out of what I was told
Compare my listening to something I like
Ask questions
Repeat what was said
Write it down
Ask them to repeate the task once more
Plan it out
Answer: Your essay sounds pretty great! The only thing that I would change is that in essays such as these evidence to support your claim should come after your claim. For example you might start your third paragraph with something like " Another reason I think I would be suitable for this position is that I can give current relevant advice," and then add in your supporting claim of why you can give relevant advice. This simply just makes your claims sound stronger and your more likely to get a higher grade but overall a great essay!
Hope this helps!
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