Answer:
1. Things from television aren't always what they seem.
For example, when Brian got into a plane crash he had gotten false hope that someone would find him within 1 to 2 days. He got these beliefs from the news. This was proven as a false reality a few days later when Brian realized that it might take a long time to find him.
2. Positivity is something someone needs to help in bleak situations.
For example, Brian thought back to when he was in school he thought to when he was with his teacher Mr. Perpich. And his point of view for the situation changed for the better.
3. You won't realize how lucky you are for what you have until it's gone.
For example, when Brian was stranded he kept on thinking back to the thought that he had nothing. The word nothing kept ringing in his head. He thought of how hungry he was from time to time and kept trying to ignore the disastrous situation at hand.
Sorry for taking a long time to write this.
Hope this helped! :)
Answer:
instead of saying Sparrow and Liam exchanged stairs across the library you could instead try saying Liam and Sparrows eyes met from across the room or across the library, or not. I think your story's fine, if you want to make it a few more sentence longer then maybe you can put like a little backstory to why Liam and Sparrow are fighting or not it's your story I'm just you know saying maybe if you want a few more sentences it's something to put.
