Them to mix minds together ♀️
If I like it: Yes, I like this poem. It seems/feels so intimate, yet somehow I feel connected to the character.
What emotions are there:I believe the emotions a reader would feel would be sorrow, pity, despair, grief, and helplessness because he/she has no power to help the abused.
What I would add to make it better: I probably wouldn't, perhaps start posting it publicly to sites like 'Wattpad', to get a wider perspective from public comments.
He/she saves people who are in danger
They will die just to make that the people that are in triyble are safe
<span>Maggie is upset that See might get the quilts</span>
