What mistake did George make?

Genetically modified foods unequally benefit rich countries, including the United States. The USDA reports that the US gained th

Vladimir79 [104]

Answer:

The first sentence if modified can make the paragraph into a stronger argumentative speech.

Explanation:

Current opening sentence: Genetically modified foods unequally benefit rich countries, including the United States.

Revised opening sentence: Rich countries including the United States currently enjoy more benefits from the production and sale of Genetically Modified Foods than developing nations.

So the complete paragraph looks like this:

Rich countries including the United States currently enjoy more benefits from the production and sale of Genetically Modified Foods than developing nations. The USDA reports that the US gained the vast majority of the total world benefit from new herbicide-tolerant soybeans in 1997. In addition, the US company that created the soybeans charged farmers a technology fee. These high adoption costs will continue to limit the benefits of genetically modified crops to rich countries that do not need the higher yields, rather than extending them to poorer nations that do.

In revising the first paragraph, we are able to go in with a stronger argument or hook which is critical to an argumentative essay.

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When Cassie starts to tell Uncle Hammer about Mr. Simms, Big Ma tries to distract both of them so that Uncle Hammer doesn’t hear

solong [7]

The effect this scene has on readers’ knowledge of Big Ma as a character is It makes her character seem rounder.

According to the given excerpt, the narrator talks about Cassie and his conversation with Uncle Hammer about Mr Simms.

Big Ma intervenes in their discussion so that Uncle Hammer does not hear this story and this makes her character seem rounder.

Big Ma is a grandma to the children, mother, wife, mother in law and widow, which gives her a round character as her role changes as tiime goes on.

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A round character is a person that her role changes as the story progresses, while a flat character is one whose character does not change during the course of the story.

Therefor, the correct answer is option A.