Answer:
they would have been more impressed by the narrator's
knowledge
Explanation:
First is A) Imagery sets moods for stories
Second I assume is D) Fast and slow because it's an "exciting" text, but the dashes cause for a pause, almost like a comma or if to say "take a breath".
The best structured sentence that best uses the comma is the second sentence being: The female statue, crowned with a wreath of olive leaves, represents commerce. The sentence talks about a statue that is crowned with leaves and symbolizes business. The second sentence perfectly captures that.