compassion, close knitted, caring, understanding
When comparing the GDPs, Instead of saying compared it to, you might want to type, "in comparison." A few transition words also might help the piece become a bit smoother. Other than that, good job on the writing! It seems very well researched!
<span>In fact, it seems like the room and its creepy atmosphere might really be getting to our speaker. Even the rustling sound of the curtains seems sad to him .As he listens, he begins to really freak out, his head filling with "fantastic terrors."His heart starts to beat faster too; to calm himself down, he has to tell himself (twice) that the knocking sound he hears is just a visitor.<span>The more he says it though, the more we all know that it can't just be that, or at least not the kind of visitor he might be expecting…</span></span>