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Flura [38]
3 years ago
11

Chelsea’s instructor told her that her first draft was wordy. What should Chelsea look for while revising to eliminate wordiness

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English
1 answer:
andrezito [222]3 years ago
8 0

Answer:

Chelsea should look for unimportant details in her first draft to exclude all the wordiness.

Explanation:

that is something important. always try not to use to much information

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