I believe that the answer to this question is A. loss of innocence.
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
Answer:
cardi b.
Explanation:
her music is censored on the radio becuase it contains innapropriate language, that is too much for some people to hear.
He could've appointed someone else to be tom's lawyer. Mr. Finch was one of the best lawyer's in the town
a or c bc the other ones do nt make sence
