Question

Please write me a well written paragraph on why living in a apartment by yourself is better then living at home.

Answer 1

Living in an apartment could bring freedom to ones life. Living at home can be challenging because you are set to your guardians expectations. Living in an apartment shows responsibility. Also living by yourself can reduce health problems like stress, anxiety and depression.

Answer 2

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having the amount of privacy w/o having to worry about roommates or family being there. also the fact that since it is your own rented property you have the ability to do anything in your apartment (that is permitted by the landlord) also being able to have friends / lovers over at any time.