My brother fell asleep
Mom not mum
So I am ver happy bot are very happy
Pizza for dinner not pizza to dinner
Answer: Awkward and choppy. The amount of pauses makes the passage not flow well together
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Is there work you can make up? I can try and help with that
Answer: I looked up at the audience and tried to swallow my fear, wiping my sweaty hands on my skirt.
Explanation: a narrative essay is telling a story based on one of your own experiences either past or present .
