maybe use a metaphor for the whole essay of nature. Or a metaphor that the train is entrancing the people to join it like they are in a trance and they are are incapable of escaping societies expectation of work
It was crowds the running giants slammed down the pathway. There was no hope but to run to the train. It rain faster than I could the flashy wind swearing through my face resisted me from entering the train. There it was the train towards Hamilton. My only hope.
Answer: The metaphor "coat of armor" affects the writer's message because, although the police weren't wearing an actual coat, it informs the readers that they were there as protection for the students just like a coat is protection from weather.
