The summary being spoken of is culled from this passage;
- As a result of a volcanic eruption, Enkai and the cattle were thrown into the sky. Enkai wanted to save his cattle. He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth. The cattle walked down the tree to Neiterkob. Neiterkob and the Maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle.
This summary ought to be revised because;
- C. The summary lacks transitions that connect ideas.
In the passage above, we see a summary that lacks cohesion and structure because of the lack of transitions at the beginning of sentences.
Transition words make sentences easy to read because they link up ideas. Examples of transition words are, however, since, but, though, etc.
The above summary lacks these transition words that connect ideas. Therefore it has to be revised for better comprehension.
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The answer is B. The topic sentence is often the FIRST sentence in a paragraph. Hope this helped!
Answer:
Explanation:
Hercule Poirot was making a comparison on how a train ride had the same dangers of a sea voyage. If we think and see every single detail it does have their similarities. They both are massive transportation machines that are capable of handling a large amount of people within their parameters. That means that for a certain amount of time you are "stuck" with the same people and unable to go anywhere else. In consequence, if something bad happens on the ride then there is going to be a 50/50 chance in everything. If it's the case of being the person who is hurt or being the person who is hurting people. Those are the types of dangers the passengers may have.
