The best revision of this sentence is the following:
The lawyer presented a clear argument to the jury (it was unbelievable how influenced they were by his case) in the hopes of winning the trial.
A pair of parentheses needs to be used in order to separate this information from the rest of the sentence and facilitate reading and comprehension. The information in the parentheses is related to the meaning of the sentence but in some way it interrupts the flow, so a pair of parentheses is necessary in order to indicate this.
Egyptian beliefs about future existence are not readily defined because the Egyptians are a very ancient civilization, making it difficult to study their religious documents.
We can arrive at this answer because:
- The Egyptians constitute a millenary civilization, with several different types of documents and that developed over time.
- This meant that the Egyptians had a very wide variety of religious documents.
- In addition, the Egyptian religion and society was influenced by other societies over time, which changed their beliefs and culture.
This made the study of Egyptian documents difficult and translated into many different languages, which had to adapt and simplify many concepts, which often left the Egyptian beliefs imprecise and poorly defined.
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Answer:
Insufficient justification is when an individual utilizes internal motivation to justify a behavior.
Based on this concept (also known as insufficient punishment) the most effective approach would be to create an external motivation that overcomes that internal choice of trying to play with the stove.
