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It has a good start, but you should add more context to what you are writing. It is hard to follow what is happening. Otherwise, the story is set up very well.
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life is something that is quite meaningless we are all born to live but we all die to live whats the point. Life is fun though and good we have our own little stories to be told and we share memories with the people we meet and love. we're born, we go to school, we work, we laugh, we cry, we die and everything in between. hope this helped have a great life ;)