A- personification
The reason would be that personification gives human qualities to something inhuman in this instance it gives anger to the ocean
Answer:
Bonnie Eager and Jerry Wrightman took vows at St. James Cathedral . The bride made her dress. At the reception, the bride and the groom drank punch and ate cake while their friends greeted them. The bride threw her bouquet and her sister caught it. The excited crowd threw rice and confetti as the best man drove a well decorated car that whisked away the bride and groom. While the brothers of the groom threw hats, the mother of the bride shed tears. All had a good time.
Answer:
3/5
Explanation:
I feel like this may be harsh but the poem doesnt have many rhetoric devices to capture a reader. Instead of smart, beautiful, kind, caring, I would suggest using imagery of Estrella that makes her that way. What makes her this way? Was she a animal lover, helped anyone in need, cook food for you? I would shorten the amount of adjectived to 3 becasue of the rule of three. I liked the repetition of "you" at the end of the poem. All in all, this is cute poem thou :)
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
