I believe that you should just check your spelling , capitalize some I's and the word January .
You should also give more detail about the Sunday event.
When you say the word conclusion I begin to think about a short paragraph / summary , this means you should bring the reader in , draw my attention to your mint idea.
I really hope that I'm helping you , :)
The answer is d. a political speech is made up of an argument and premise
It helps us understand how Lunar year is celebrated and helps us better understand everything in order
Pass events or about our ancestry