Answer:
redundancy coz of the "No" which is being repeated
Don't jump to conclusions about the time, if they're trying to be petty just take it easy
It shapes what kinds of words you use or how you approach the subject. if your writing to children you would write it differently then you would to adults, you would use smaller words, etc.
I think "that" is the adjective clause because you can remove it without ruining the sentence.