In at least 300 words, construct an essay that compares any two characters from this unit. The characters must each be from diff
erent literature selections. Construct a formal analysis of about one page using the correct formal conventions of Standard English. You should consider if the character is a protagonist or antagonist, dynamic, flat, and the ways in which the characterization is revealed by the author (direct and indirect). Consider how theme may inform character and the central conflict of the characters. You may use the rubric to assist you. Criteria Points Possible 20
(10) 11-19
(6-9) 6-10
(3-5) 0-5
(0-2) Points Earned
Ideas & Content
Main theme
Supporting details
20 Clear, focused, interesting ideas with appropriate detail Evident main idea with some support which may be general or limited Main idea may be unclear; supporting detail is vague or off topic Central idea or theme is not stated; supporting detail may be nonexistent
Organization
Structure
Introduction
Conclusion
20 Strong organization; seamless paragraph transitions; Effective and Engaging intro and conclusion Organization is appropriate but conventional; Attempt at introduction and conclusion Attempts at organization, inappropriate use of lists or bullets; introduction and conclusion are not developed No introduction or conclusion; no clear organizational framework or transitions
Voice
Personality
Sense of audience
20 Appropriate to audience; Expressive, engaging, sincere Voice is appropriate to topic, but Inconsistent or dry Voice may be inappropriate; writing may seem mechanical Writer's voice is inappropriate or nonexistent
Word Choice
Precision
Effectiveness
Imagery
10 Broad range of descriptive words; Creative examples and vivid details and images Language is functional and appropriate; descriptions may lack detail or be overdone Words may be correct but simplistic; no attempt at detail, description, or examples Word choice is limited, words are often misused, supporting detail and examples are nonexistent
Sentence Fluency
rhythm, flow
variety
10 Easy flow and rhythm; good variety in length and structure Sentences are appropriate but lack variety and length Awkward phrasing and structure, similar patterns and choppy language Sentences are incomplete or difficult to follow, language is confusing
Conventions
age appropriate spelling, caps, punctuation, grammar
20 Strong use of correct conventions; errors are few and minor Most writing conventions correct; occasional high profile errors Frequent errors; most do not interfere with readability Frequent errors interfere with readability
100
if you get this right ill give you 70 points plus brainlest ( ITS AN EXAM )
Answer: The 2 characters that are the main spotlight in this story are Jack and Ralph. They are great leaders but they have different ways of leading others. However they have different goals and that leads to arguments and in the end separation. Even in all the hardships, the littluns still caused Ralph and Jack to add another worry about the “beast” into their list of worries Even though Jack and Ralph are innocent and mature at the start, they will break mentally in the end without civilization to keep them sane.
Jack and Ralph are great leaders but they have different ways of leading. Jack’s way of leading is more into the dictator type but Ralph is more into the democracy type. Ralph likes to get ideas and ask for volunteers to do them while Jack likes to tell others what to do.Even though they all agreed to the cliffs and the outhouses and there always has to be water in the coconut shells, but they all forgot about it and do it everywhere. As time passes arguments happens and they fought for leadership.
Even though Jack and Ralph work well together but different goals caused them to separate. Jack’s goal is to hunt pigs and go wild in the forest ,but Ralph’s goal is to get off the island and stay alive. They are enthusiastic about the idea of building a signal fire to go back home, the hunters who are supposed to look after it were too focused on hunting the pig for food and left it to go out at the most crucial point. While they are hunting and the fire went out, a ship came pass by and went past them like they didn’t even exist.This accident caused
Ralph and Jack into an argument that would eventually lead to separation.
