Answer: It unnecessarily restates the editorials claim
Explanation:
Point 4 is basically point three and one simplified.
A paragraph is a series of sentences that are organized and coherent, and are all related to a single topic. Almost every piece of writing you do that is longer than a few sentences should be organized into paragraphs. This is because paragraphs show a reader where the subdivisions of an essay begin and end, and thus help the reader see the organization of the essay and grasp its main points.
-Do a complete background check
-Give them trails to complete
-make them fill out a form, and make them tell truth
These are the only things I could think of, hope this helps you ♥︎
