No because an ellipsis purpose is to add suspension or drag the sentence of for the reader to question its purpose. This sentence uses the ellipsis with the purpose of a comma, adding a pause before explaining the subject further.
1) I enjoyed reading the book which I borrowed from the library
2) Because the boy scored two goals, we hailed him
3) Filled with relief after finding the key, I vowed not to lose it again
4) In the common room, we have a radio that I like listening to.
5) If you don’t mind, could i see the shoes you just bought?
I work in a small company
Answer: My most embarrassing moment! It couldn't have been worse! When I was in high school, I had a huge crush on Jane. She was smart, fun and beautiful inside out! It happened one rainy day just after I_. Jane, who was my crush told me that she was alone and asked if I could wait forher. I was thrilled of course! So, after I got a little impatient., I called her up. At first I wasn't sure if I was correct. However I checked the number, which was a little bit early so, I waited, I waited some more. Because the rain was pouring heavily I was now socked wet.My new clothes, which my mom bought for me, were ruined. I looked like a hobo who was.out in the rain. Just when I was about to text her, Jane answered,'' I hope.that you will forgive.me.'' she said as she took a picture of me and then ran away with my umbrella. It.was at that.moment that I felt so sad and embarrassed
