The store had been closed for two days; however, Murray still needed to get in.
The tense is all mixed up, but it looks like present is used most often, so "emitted" should be changed to "emits" and "pulled" should be changed to "pulls." I can't see the entire paragraph so just make sure that's consistent.
You don't need a comma in "running towards us with the fire extinguisher."
"Your mother and me" should be "Your mother and I." For reference try taking our "your mother" - it sounds pretty silly to say "me thinks" unless you're in the 1600s, right? And it should be "think" instead of "thinks."
I could be wrong, but I would think 'verb'.
Hopes this helps!
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The tone of the story “Talk” by Harold Courlander and George Herzog is C. humorous. This story has a truly funny and engaging plot about a farmer who suddenly founds out that everything around him can speak. He was frightened and ran away. This story prepared a circle of hilarious dialogues as every stranger that the main character came across found out the same thing so they all run together from this nightmare.<span>
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