Cut tomatoes because there cut if no light they will rot
The correct answer is D. It is not a strong example of paraphrasing. It just rearranges the original words in a new order.
Explanation:
In writing, paraphrasing implies using the ideas of an external source and author and expressing them by using your own words, because of this a strong paraphrasing would change the language used but keep the essence and main points of the original ideas. In the excerpt presented, the author tried to paraphrase a passage that describes cone snails. However, in the passage paraphrased the author uses the same terms and words than in the original passage which means he or she is not expressing the ideas of the original passage with his or her own words but only changing the order of ideas the text and therefore this is not a strong paraphrasing and can even be considered a plagiarism as the same words and ideas are being used. Therefore, this text can be described as "It is not a strong example of paraphrasing. It just rearranges the original words in a new order".
- Make sure the story line is clear !! And the characters and how their personality
- use interesting language
- plot twist
- use a variety of sentence types
- detailed description of places, or yourself
- make sure you don’t put a lot of pressure on yourself to finish it or if something goes wrong while you are writing .
Answer:
1. The king thought for a moment then he said “open all the windows”.A few bees which were
outside the palace rushed in they flew towards the flowers and settled on the real flower
to pluck nectar.
2. Well the class seemed to like it the students listened with full attention and when it was
all over they clapped with delight and one of them said “believe me it was a great day for
me”.
