Very knowledgeable. I will keep this in the records.
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It really depends. If the student that is peer reviewing is diligent in doing the task he/she is given, it may improve peoples writing style. Reviews of drafts may also help students in being able to critique others as well as give feedback, while building a relationship with the writer.
However, if the peer reviewer does not do a good job, then it would not help improve their writings.
A good review generally consists of at least one or more positive feedback, critique on any problems, some opinions on how to fix some issues, of course the basics such as spelling & grammar check, but the whole of the peer review is to give some other view, and trying to mold the essay into something better.
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its "This turned out to be a much more useful gift, granting the Athenians not only the olives themselves as sustenance, but also a source of oil for their lamps and for cooking their food as well as the wood from the olive tree to build their boats and houses.” ( Paragraph 6)
The beginnings of the maasai is the myth of the ethnic group in the country Kenya. This is a story of place who has a god named Enkai. Enkai was rumored as the man who owns all the cattle in the world. Enkai showerd the cattle down to the earth on each maasians.....Hope this helps
Adam has spent most of his time thinking he is the only one on earth, he hasnt ever seen anyone, or known who his family was until he got a knock on his door “huh? Adam said. He’s never heard a knock in his life. He looked out his window and saw a strange boy. “Whats that? Thing?” Adam said he opened the door and the kid had dark grimmy eyes, almost staring into his soul. Adam faintly looked around and said “um, can i help you?” The boy said nothing just staring at him, then he ran away. “Wait!” Adam said “come back!” He tried to chase the boy but he was to fast. Out of breath he said “How...how did he run so fast?” Adam looked at the floor and he noticed he dropped something. To his surprise the handwriting was nice and neat. It said a dark and creepy message. “Nothing lasts forever, especially you.”
