Answer:
B) a closing idea.
Explanation:
It couldn't be D, because that would go in a topic sentence
Can't be A, I think that is concrete details.
C, is maybe commentary.
So its B.
Answer:
Cheesy adjectives and add many many unnecessarily fluffy descriptions
Explanation:
All you need to do is maybe replace "felt happy" with "her heart pounded with happiness"/"walked down the school hallway" to "excitedly waltzed down the hallway and into the basking rays of the radiant sun" or something of the such and some dialogue lines in between Denise and her mom.
I think you'll be fine for vivid descriptions and strong imagery as long as you elaborate on Denise's feelings a bit more. I'll give you some bits you can use: "a warm smile", "stomach fluttered", "'I'm proud of the results of my hard work!'"
Anything cheesy should be perfectly enough to satisfy your teacher.
(Apologies that I have not given you a paragraph to copy-paste. Hopefully these pointers can guide you a bit :))
Answer:
They really had time to do anything because they were shot or in chambers like Hitler did. After sense then she didn't really trust until today she don't want people to touch her cause she remembered about the holocaust. Like try not get in content with the people that are sick and other reasons. To stay away from illness and not trust killers or don't go to low rate view.
Explanation:
I hope this helped my friend i read through everything and i remembered all by head!
