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hey! thanks for the question.
from planning to drafting, i'd suggest doing research and knowing what you're going to talk about. organize it properly, maybe by cause and effect, or a timeline, ect. make sure the order makes sense and flows correctly.
revising is usually more like fixing the rough draft, and organizing it so it goes smoothly. editting is the final draft, in which you make it sound better.
taking a break is important because you need to get evidence, and read examples, which you can do while resting your fingers from writing.
make sure to rephrase this when answering :)
Answer:
I would say line 3
Explanation:
Between lines three and four, three is less descriptive, so that is the line that needs removed.
Answer:
Explanation:
There were four social classes in Elizabethan England. Nobility were the highest social class below the Queen in Elizabethan England. Nobles were the lords and ladies. They were rich and powerful and were the smallest of all the social classes. There were only about 50 noble families during the reign of Elizabeth the First. To become a noble, a person had to be granted the title by the king or queen. The title of nobility was also passed through family blood lines. Once a person was a noble, they had to commit a serious crime in order to be stripped of the title. (1)
When you go to the fitness place and you see an esculater that people using.
Answer: by explaining how it took many people to coordinate the first successful flight
Explanation:
As much as history mostly remembers only the Wright brothers for this first flight, this passage shows that teamwork was necessary for the impossibility of flight to become possible as it showed how it took different people to coordinate that first flight.
From the men who worked at the Life-Saving station to the men who placed tracks on the ground to the men who kept time. They worked as a team and were all needed for the first successful flight.
