The revision that would most improve Paola’s conclusion is: adding a closing statement to restate the key message.
<h3>What is a revision?</h3>
A revision in the context used above is an improved form of a text. Paola's analysis of the essay about Martin Luther is good.
However, the closing statement lacks a transition that identifies it as a conclusion.
A closing statement that restates the key message of the text should be used by Paola.
Learn more about a closing statement here:
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