The author can use the five senses to better help you visualize what is going on.
Answer:
The revision that will correct the punctuation error in the sentence is:
2. replacing the comma after "aside" with a semicolon
Explanation:
The sentence can be basically divided into <u>two main ideas</u>. One concerns the shopping list made by Angela's brother. The other concerns Angela picking up the real list to go shopping. <u>The first idea is developed by listing the silly items Angela's brother wrote down and saying that Angela put that list aside. To start the second idea, a comma does not suffice. Therefore, we need to place a semicolon after "aside", since that is where the first idea ends. The semicolon will come before "then", which is the mark of what Angela did next, the second idea. </u>The correct sentence is:
"Chuckling, Angela looked over her little brother's shopping list of bubble gum, race cars, and a puppy, and laid it aside; then, ignoring Harry's protests, she picked up the real list and headed for the door."
If this is what you mean, an adverbial phrase is a group of words that refines the meaning of a verb, adjective, or adverb. similar to adverbs, adverbial phrases modify other words by explaining why, how, where, or when an action occurred.
Henry Roth wrote the book and it is about a young boy growing up in the Jewish immigrant ghetto of New York's Lower East Side in the early twentieth century bebe :)
