After comparing the two sentences, we can say that the revised sentence does NOT:
D. Create a compound sentence.
<h3>What is a compound sentence?</h3>
A compoundsentence is formed when we join two independent clauses by using a coordinating conjunction (for, and, nor, but, yet, so). Example: Jena loves cooking, but she dislikes doing the dishes.
<h3>What about the revised sentence?</h3>
The revised sentence does not create a compound sentence. Notice that it does not have any of the coordinatingconjunctions mentioned above. It does not have two clauses as well, but one phrase and one clause.
It does, however, add a participial phrase starter, use the literary present tense, and edit out a linking structure.
Therefore, we can conclude that letter D is the correct option concerning the revised sentence.
