A few years ago I had an English teacher that encouraged "The Oreo Method"; it compares effective constructive criticism to an Oreo cookie.
The filling in the middle was the constructive criticism, but before and after that, you offer positive feedback for the writer.
Pretty self explanatory:
1. Provide one piece of positive feedback first and linger on it for a couple sentences; let them know how important that "thing" is and, in a way, praise them for doing it. This primes them to accept your feedback cause they know how thoroughly you've read and analyzed their work.
2. Offer any and all of the constructive criticism you have; stay subtle and be concise with all your feedback.
3. Offer more positive feedback, as many good things as you can come up with.
By submerging the constructive criticism between positive feedback, you keep their hopes up while still thoroughly conveying weak spots in their work.
I hope this kinda made sense; it's a very self explanatory idea so I had trouble elaborating on it.
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Answer: The journal of someone who was there at the time.
Explanation: The journal of a person who was present at the fall of the Berlin wall would be a perfect source, or footage of the event, or anything first-person. People who were actually there and participated are always the best sources for any historical event. (:
Answer:
Hi! I don't know exactly what you want, but I can give you some tips and points to use.
POTENTIAL ARGUMENT POINTS:
- Safety : it is easy and fast to call emergency services
- Time-saving : being able to surf the web without a computer saves a lot of time, and time is money!
- Communication : cell phones keep us in touch with friends and loved ones
-World Access : We have the whole world at our fingertips and can connect to people around the globe.
TIPS:
- DO NOT FORGET A COUNTER ARGUMENT!!! For example, if you were arguing for the safety aspect, you could say something like, "Although it can be argued that cell phone use can cause harm to teens, cell phones contribute to a lot of kids' and teens' safety because ....blah blah blah."
- USE STATISTICS! Teachers eat that stuff up. Do not be afraid to just throw them into a paragraph to back something up.
That is pretty much all I can think of rn. Good luck! :)
