Answer:
Janice is ready to graduate and has a new job lined up at a law firm in Boston.
Explanation:
Janice is already to graduate and has a new job lined up at a law firm in Boston
"Already" would be the one word used incorrectly, a more appropriate word would be just simply "ready"
Jamie Moore being unkind should be left out. That’s direct characterization, which isn’t necessary in a summary of a plot. It’s descriptive rather than a detail that moves the plot along.
I’m confused, what answer do you need? Like what’s the question