The biggest issue with this is that the first sentence is run-on, you should consider breaking it into smaller sentences, maybe by getting rid of the "and" after describing the mother, replacing it with a period and letting the father get a sentence of his own. Also, you could try "-on how happy the Railway family is. The story also uses detail on how nice the parents are-" something along those lines, just to break the run-on sentence?
This is minor, but at the end "creates a sense of perfection, by describing their house-" the comma before by isn't necessary, and can either be deleted, or you can rephrase like "a sense of perfection. The story does this by describing-"
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Because it involved many nations.
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It was called the Great War because the world has never seen a conflict of that size. Over 59 million troops were mobilized. Many millions of people died or get injured. The conflict reshaped politically, economically, socially, and culturally Europe and the whole world.
It was named like that because the people of those days did not believe that almost 30 years after that the world would be at the most disastrous conflict of its history.
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Grover the satyr led Luke, Annabeth, and Thalia on a mission. They go way back because that was when they first arrived at Camp Half-Blood. The fourth character they are linked by is Thalia.
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