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The entire song is wonderful, I enjoyed the path the song took to show how the singer was being dragged in the dirt by someone and then showing how it will be regretted later on. The listener can tell that the singer is frustrated and yet sad by the way she is being discouraged by someone she loves. The Post-chorus shows a lot of where the hit of the song will fall under the "oohs" that are used will be powerful and be a show of emotion. The rhyme scheme was very good but the part within the VERSE 1 ""Don’t change yourself for someone else, no ”"But then force me to be Someone that I don’t even know"" sounds slightly choppy but that is mainly due because I cannot see/hear the melody lol.
Excellent job with the use of the shifting of ideas, many song writers struggle from going from one side of the topic to another but, you have proved to be a writer who can clearly get her ideas out and can fluidly move from one part to another even throughout the chorus and verses of the song.
This is very powerful and emotional song that can empathize with many listeners who are discouraged by loved ones. This is a song that a broad variety of people can listen to and feel relatable or can relate to the singer. You picked an excellent topic to write about.
Hats off to you writer! You did very well!
The melody that will be created with the post-chorus
Hope this helps!!! :D
