Question

Could I please get feedback for my essay on The Tempest (Grade 10, English)

Answer 1

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Explanation:

The content and vocabulary of this response is grade level. You should try to include better transitions when mentioning certain events in "The Tempest". Lastly, your conclusion should be a symposis of what you wrote not just a claim. Expand furthmore on the deeper meaning of the abuse of power and superiority. P.S. make sure to put all citations from the text in parentheses as it would be easier for the reader to see your citation.