(D) replacing “cooler” with “more dramatic” in sentence 4
The word "cooler" is slang and creates an informal tone. By changing it to "more dramatic" the formal tone is continued all the way to the end of the passage. Option A is not a good option because contractions should not be used in formal writing. Option B will not change the formality of the paragraph. Option C is also not a good choice, changing "popular" to "top" would not change the tone to being more formal.
Answer:second one I think
Explanation:
I think
Answer: Use them when you need to list things or when you sort of "pause" in your sentence.
Explanation: also and example would be good
Answer:
He wants to make sure the reader recognizes the disdain he has for Brown.