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I think your descriptions are great! I like the way you describe the setting and how it makes the observer feel with extreme detail. I was able to picture everything really well in my head. Moving forwards, I think what you should do is reassess what you're writing about. Maybe I misunderstood what you meant by <em>"describing a moutain," </em>but I feel that you spent too much time talking about the overall setting and how it made the observer feel instead of the actual mountain. I liked your description of the mountain being "a beast arisen from nowhere; its tip to be unseen" and I think you should continue this as you'll prevent yourself from drifting too far from the object of interest.
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To swim
swim (present) // swam (past) // swum (past participle)
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John Thornton and Buck's connection goes far beyond the working relationship that Buck had with Francois and Perrault. He respected those men for their understanding of dogs and of nature, but he had no great affection for them. John Thornton is "the ideal master," for he understands Buck without difficulty or confusion. Buck loves him because he shows his need for Buck, repeatedly demonstrating that Buck can help him in ways that others can't.
The context clues are important to know how the author use Mr. Spallner's thoughts on the crowd to create suspense.
<h3>What are context clues?</h3>
Your information is incomplete as the text or story about any given. Therefore, an overview will be given.
It should be noted that context clues are the hints that are given in a literary work. In this case, it's important to read and understand the story.
Also, it's vital to understand the theme and how the characters affected the plot in the story. This is important to know his suspense was created.
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Arguing can lead to a few things which can then lead to a heart attack! I hope I helped.
