Maby Try mentioning Martin Luther King junior and black right swipe right and that kind of stuff
1.My first time in the hospital was a terrible time for me. I broke my ankle during a fight with a classmate and I had to be taken to the hospital by the Headmaster. Everything in the hospital environment sent waves of shivers down my spine and I vowed never to get myself into situations that will make me to visit the hospital again.
2. The action verbs in the paragraph are as follow: Broke, taken, sent, vowed, visit and get.
The helping verbs in the paragraph are as follow: was and had.
Action verbs are those verbs that express action, they tell us what a subject is doing or has done. They are the main verbs in sentences. Helping verbs on the other hand help the action verbs by extending their meanings.
George Herbert, "The Collar" - cacophony
John Donne, Sonnet 10 - paradox
John Donne, "The Sun Rising" - hyperbole
Andrew Marvell, "To His Coy Mistress" - carpe diem
John Donne, "The Flea" - synecdoche