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amm1812
2 years ago
8

40 POINTS!!! I need some help writing this paragraph, I have it mostly written but would like it proofread. Please give any feed

back you can, I have included the rubric (it is broad but that is how the teacher at my school does it). Thanks!

English
1 answer:
Ann [662]2 years ago
3 0

Answer:

It is perfect.

Explanation:

It satisfies all of the criteria given. I also like how you've included quotes, cited examples, and reference sources. It should be good to go.

:)

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