Both Macbeths become victims of their guilt, and it manifests itself in hallucinations. Macbeth sees the ghost of Banquo everywhere, whereas Lady Macbeth sees blood on her hands.
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
B) The clothes in the thrift store are ruined by water damage.
is correct cuz i just guessed it and right
3rd one goes with stereotypes
Answer:
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Explanation: