Answer:
It looks perfect what I would suggest is to show your teacher this so they can see.
Explanation:
do, ti, do, re, mi, re, ( ), do, mi, fa, so, ( ), fa, mi, re, ( ), do, mi, fa, so, so, mi, do, ( )
You'll just have to trust me.
I think it is critique.
sorry if im wrong!
Captures the meaning and importance of a subject through visual representation instead of words.
hope this helps
