Margot wanted to become a teacher
Try "The Scarlet Letter."
Answer:
1. Doctor : You should take this medicine every day.
Patient : Should I take it before dinner or after dinner?
Doctor : No, you should take it after breakfast.
The Doctor advised the patient that (a) he should take the medicine every day. The patient further asked (b) if he should take it before or after dinner.The doctor replied negatively and then said (c) that he should take it after breakfast.
2. Teacher : Children, let us all pledge to save trees.
Children : Yes, Mam, we all pledge to save our trees as the trees are the lungs of the city.
Teacher : Let us start today by planting a sapling.
The teacher asked all the children to pledge to save trees. The children replied affirmatively (a) that they pledge to save their trees as the (b) lungs of the city. Then the teacher said that (c)they would start by planting a sapling.
The paragraph doesnt flow very well because of all the simple sentences. it has a very simple rythm and the most important ideas are "<span>As a young girl, she struggled a great deal. She left home at 21. She moved to the West Coast. There, she chose to educate herself. She chose studies over security. She lived in poverty for many years. She eventually got a job teaching at university." This is because it stays on topic. Everything else really isnt important.The ideas are all spread out and really dont connect very well. TO improve this paragraph you need to connect the sentenes and change some to stay on topic.</span>
