Question

Rate my story 20 characters blah blah blah look at the picture

Answer 1

Answer:

The only thing you need you fix is marissa you should capitalized the M

Explanation:

Other then that its looks great!!

Answer 2

Answer:

I would rate this story a 10.

Explanation:

There is one mistake, you said that it's 2:30 at night there is only 2, 2:30s and that's AM and PM. I believe what your really meant to say was in the morning since it was still dark and it's usually the time most people are asleep. So yeah, you can leave it or fix it, up to you. You also need to capitalize Marissa since it is a person.

~Kandy~

Hope this helps!

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