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She ascended the stair case with her face guarded by her dark hood. The glare of light illuminated the burn on the side of her face, the large blemish covering most of her cheek and part of her right eye.
She had the demeanor that brought suspicion from wandering eyes around the library.The events of earlier that day flashed across her memory in chronological order. Starting from the moment it all began to the moment it ended. It started as domestic abuse but slowly and gradually turned into something more. She should have never let it go that far.
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If I was a hollywood movie producer and I am remaking this video for a 21st century audience, I would want to have Morgan Freeman as my speaker and set the scene at a futuristic setting. A futuristic setting would include any science fiction concepts. Having Morgan Freeman would not only make the audience get interested with a video having a familiar voice in it, but it would give depth and meaning to the entire idea itself. It would align with the on going trends of the 21st century. It would also make it entertaining. While making this, I would make sure to still hold the video contents but with more added features to make the video enticing. Also add probably more animations or simulations to show what the video actually means.
Authors should be lower-cased (and British should stay upper-cased)
Conflict drives plot. without a conflict there is no plot. unless the protagonist overcomes some sort of obstacle there is no story. From conflict also comes the themes of most novels.
What would the themes of Gatsby be if Daisy has taken him quickly when she was younger? Without his struggle to becomes rich in order to be worthy of the girl he loved, there would be no Marxist theme behind the story and the narrative would have been a boring day in the life account of some guy in the 1920s.
It's also through conflict that a character arch is achieved. You first meet the protagonist in his daily life, he encounters an obstacle or conflict (whether is be against society, nature, or himself. He stumbles to find the right answer to overcome it. He fails. Tries again. Learns something about himself through the conflict and triumphs at the end (unless we're reading a tragedy).
Conflict is one of the most necessary plot and character devices in any kind of writing (except sometimes poetry)
