Answer:
The first one is Past Simple and next is Past Perfect. Personality, I think, that the first is better
Bake Sale Tale
Today is the day I'm going to the bake sale for school. I jumped out of bed and got dressed quicker then a jack rabbit. As I walked downstairs I could already smell fresh chocolate chip cookies that Mom has been making for the bake sale. "Good morning!" I yelled with excitement . "Good morning sweetie." she replied. I looked over her shoulder at the gooey , warm brownies. I wanted to grab one, mom interrupted"No, these are for later and there not quite done yet." So she put the brownies back into the oven and started to clean a little. Hours passed and the brownies where done or so I thought...
Mom grabbed her purse and the brownies and got into the car so I followed. Once we where at the bake sell you could smell so many various aroma's such as pumpkin pie, sweet apple cobbler, and much more. When we got to our table Mom put the brownies on the table, and people started to gather around. Mom quickly took off the lid, and then I saw the brownies amass. "Oh no!" I said in a quite tone. Mom looked at me and said "Sorry, I guess it's still not finished. It was warm and perfect before we left."
Then I quickly started to convey, I looked at everyone's sweets and they where perfect. Everyone enjoyed theres, why did this happen to me? This isn't fair! I went to the Principal which she was the one who started the bake sell. I said in a sad tone "Can you please end the bake sale?" she replied "Why?" I told her "Well my brownies are undercooked, and can't be eaten." For a few minutes I tried to mediate the principal, but it didn't work. Suddenly Mom ran up to me with a new box of brownies. I shouted "You got more brownies?" Mom replied "Yes, I did!" We went back to the table and placed the brownies down, and a bunch of people amass around our table buying a brownie. I quickly reverted from my depressed state to being filled with joy. I hovered over the brownies with hungry intent.
Remember you may give up, but anything can happen so just wait. Things happen for a pretty good reason.
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Answer:
Mr representative of the council in your office.
Cordial greeting
Allow me to inform you that within the present term, a commemoration product of the development and fulfillment of your functions is attached to your position, within the position at your command. The foregoing is in order to express to you in a very pleasant way my high commemoration regarding your excellent, efficient and effective work and performance within the fulfillment of your functions, is the moment to flatter each one of the resources used for the fulfillment of the achievements in the last 5 years, however, it should be noted that the same conduct must be maintained during the course of the service in a personal way, in the same way, I appreciate the projection implemented for the development of the objectives and missions set in motion and virtue of the entity, they will be taken into consideration to give you the correct application according to the indications provided by you.
Finally, I reiterate my gratitude and agreement regarding your need
Yours sincerely Juanito Alimaña.
Explanation:
The letter is sent to commemorate and praise the work, effort and dedication of the municipal administration. Also, the commitment with broad direction when meeting the proposed goals after 5 years. And anticipating the fulfillment of all future plans.
Odysseus, the hero from Homer’s epic poem The Odyssey, does not kill the brutish cyclops, Polyphemus, because Odysseus and his men would be trapped in the cave.
“Then he rolled a huge stone to the mouth of the cave—so huge that two and twenty strong four-wheeled wagons would not be enough to draw it from its place against the doorway.”
<em>-ur local skatergirl, Rin:)</em>
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