Can you list examples of the statements or do i give one???
Hi I think you did a pretty good job on this, but as you know nothing is perfect!
I would recommend adding more transitions, ending it with something more special, use more advanced words than the basic ones, more parallelism and have a better intro but overall I think it's very lovely.
Also you could say something like "Today, I would like to thank all those incredible people who have helped me become who I am today and show my gratitude through this small essay/or whatever.
Is this a real question??????????????????
High school is hell. You have to do so much homework. Listen to teachers waffle all day long and never get a long enough break between classes. High school is the best place to have fun with mates though. High school is fun when you are the best in everything only.
I have more than one
vengeful
homicidal
proud
calculating
possibly insane
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